If you could not tell this is about writing but I went away from the theme. Everyone was thinking about dark mystery's I went for comedy I will make a part 2 so you can see the other part for I loved it so much I added on more. I will be trying to do more blog posts.
Here is my work.
My shoes were soaked and the rain wouldn’t stop. A grey car I didn’t recognise pulled up beside us. The blustery wind blew rain in my eyes as the window of the car rolled down. Me and my ‘friend’ stood still ‘what are you children doing out this late’ his voice was dark and shadowing but familiar. Then it hit me it was my DAD!!!!!!! And you know how they say that dads don't like when their daughters have friends that are boys well my dad was the perfect example of that.
thank you for reading this blog post.I would love to hear some feedback.Have a nice day.
Hi Isabella,
ReplyDeleteI like the way of your idea of putting 'friend' but what did you mean about that. But Great Job Keep It Up
I wait for your reply,
:)Harmony
Hey Harmony you know how i'm terrible at spelling seems you have some trouble as well what i meant by 'friend' is hes just my friend but i'm just trying to make it funny thank you for your comment.
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