Its writing but this time we went onto a site called the the most dangerous random prompt generator. You must write a story in 5 mins but you cant stop here's a quick hack you can basically pause by constantly pushing buttons. Even though I didn't do it at the same time as everyone else did.
This is my goals.
- Be fluent writers
- Know what writing fluency feels like
Here is the story I wrote.
He kept absolutely still as the footsteps got louder he tried not to suffocate as he laid under the bed he was wondering what had happened to his brother and his family. The man with the knife in his hand stormed around the house. he thought Mums had boyfriends before but we had not thought that they would ever find us maybe the man with the knife was one of them looking for revenge but why would the man with the knife come. mum moves after she breaks up with them and moves and how did the man with the knife find us we live on the other side of the planet from where all of mums boyfriends were so how could the man with the knife find us he might have put a tracker on mum when he last saw her or on one of the devises ‘Hello where are you I know your here you're going to tell me where you're mother is or you shall join your father... in the skies so which will it be death or freedom you have 10 seconds chose wisely’.
And that's my story. Why don't you give me some feedback I would love that. And remember its nearly Halloween.
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