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Friday, 22 March 2019

the plaine mistry


Helloooooooooooooooooooo welcome back to ze blog

so this is something called picture prompt we get a photo given to us and we have
to write a story here is the story I wrote

Hi my name Jadis I live in Brazilian next to the Amazon. Me and my friends
Emma Jackson and Eli like to go into the jungle and explore. I was at my hut when I
heard a strange noise coming from outside


I went outside to see a plane crashing. I went running over to my friends huts and
tell them
what I saw. We rushed off to get our backpack pack sum snacks and we go off we leave a
note at our huts for our parents. Then we go off into the jungle we go around picking
up pieces of the plane
So it doesn't litter the place they were only small pieces. We could never lift up one of the
pig parts we then see little pieces of fire. We quickly put it out with our shoes we had to camp
the night out there

So we got our tent and set up. snuggle up in our sleeping bags and go to sleep I couldn't sleep
though. I was so worried what if there was people on that plane what if they were hurt or worse


I got the bad thoughts out of my head and went to sleep the next morning we got up and Eli
climbed up a tree. He looked around until he score some broken trees we started walking
towards were he said it was

When we got near it we saw some people walking they were bruised and had scratches all
over. One of the people was a mother with a child she was crying ‘ my child is still back their
stuck’ we looked back from were they came
We sore a little boy stuck under some debrie. We started going towards the little boy everybody
looked on in fear as we got closer we had no idea why they were so scared then a Jaguar
came out Emma pulled out a piece of steak. She was planning on eating it it as already cooked
she checked it and the jaguar went sprinting after it Jackson went over towards the little kid we
all come over to push it out of the way. He was stuck and cornered when we pushed it out of the
way he went running over to his mother.

‘ That story is not true Melissa‘ Jacky don't interrupt my story ‘ my little brother Jacky never
believed in that story but I did because she was my mother ‘ you have to admit I think your mom
made that up
’ said Bruce I looked at the plane with all of its rust and the hole in the side ‘but if it is true then
how did it get the hole in the side ‘ said Alisha

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