this is my hotspot doc we get a theme and then we write a story we only do this theme every Friday
sorry if its bad I didn't have time to fully edit it
It was just a dream or was it?
The light hurt my eyes. Somehow I was in a bunker I heard monstrous sound's outside.
I heard thumping like something huge was out their bigger than a house growls like a wolf.
But louder I went to the vent I felt a strong pain in my side. I had been starving for days there were
scratches and scars all over the vent like. Something was shoved through here or
someoneonce I reached the top. the growling had stopped I looked around it was just forest
I climbed up then
something charged at me. I turned around it looked like a bear but bigger
it was going so fast and getting
faster by the minute. I started to shake I closed my eyes then. I was in my bed I looked
around I was
finally safe then I heard the growling. I looked out my window and their was the bear
I heard thumping like something huge was out their bigger than a house growls like a wolf.
But louder I went to the vent I felt a strong pain in my side. I had been starving for days there were
scratches and scars all over the vent like. Something was shoved through here or
someoneonce I reached the top. the growling had stopped I looked around it was just forest
I climbed up then
something charged at me. I turned around it looked like a bear but bigger
it was going so fast and getting
faster by the minute. I started to shake I closed my eyes then. I was in my bed I looked
around I was
finally safe then I heard the growling. I looked out my window and their was the bear
thanks for reading I would love to here some feedback
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