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Friday, 28 July 2017

Persistent pigeons

Persistent pigeons


One hot and sunny day me and my 2 brothers were sitting in the nest. OMG I nearly forgot to tell you my name. I am the oldest and my name is Chicken Nugget and my brothers names are  Sunny and Lava. We were all very very very VERY bored then Lava squeaked and then we all did for a couple of hours. Then Lava looked to the left and saw a cupcake. We all hopped out of the nest then I as the oldest did as well. Then Sunny hopped out, well really he fell out.

 We went to the cupcake I tried to jump up, then I came up with a good idea. We all hopped on top of each other and tried to get the cupcake but then we all fell down. Then we tried to think of a new idea. Then Lava set up this thing when me and sunny were talking and thought we should give up.Then when we saw what he was doing. When he had finished he asked Sunny to jump on the other side and then Sunny did. It didn't work then i did as well then he went flying

and fall off the ledge and missed the cupcake then we tried over and over and over and over to get it. Then we thought of something else and then we tried to climb the wall it was a total Fail then we  made a canone it didn't even work. Then we just went back to the nest and then one hour later we saw mum. We started to squeak and she dropped down a worm then i told mum ‘i'm tired of having worm’s can’t you see the muffin over there

‘ mum then sadly said. but worms are good for you and … MUFFIN i will get it for you guys after you eat your worm ok’. me and my 2 brothers / lava and sunny said ok then mama. We gobbled the worm up and then mum went and got us the muffin and we all eat it even mum.


The end

By Isabella

3 comments:

  1. That is so cool well done Bella this is a really cool writing.

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  2. good job bella it is such a good story

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