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Wednesday, 1 December 2021

Writing story.

 Hello welocme back to my blog.


Writing can be both calming but also annoying at times even if i found writijg this calming at first I found it annoying that we had to do it but I did enjoy it. You now about the who,what,when,where thing well we wrote a story off of that everyone would put in ideas and we would choose one to write the promt this time was,who:person and a beast  what:torch/lantern/fire torch   when:2:30 am   where:dark forest.

Then we had to write a story with that my sory was 545 words long so here is my work.

(it is a little bit dark and a bit groosem so sorry about that I was zoned out and ended up writing it like this)


Tip tap tip tap SNAP the musk air of a forest. Although this forest was banned because of

what happened i was allowed to go through. Although having a name it's just called the

dark forest maybe it's called the dark forest because this is where the infection started,

and the god of death got infected and killed by the thing that he ruled.


But it probably doesn't reach this far out i've been walking for so long it has to be around

2:30 am maybe 3:00 am as I set up my camp I hear something behind me or is it beside

or infront I can't tell where it is by the noise its like theres more then one as I freeze in

shock from the feeling of breath down my neck. 


I slowly move my hand creating a lantern sphere spell it isn't that big and does not cause

much light since I was to scared to move to much from the fear that it might get me as

I slowly go down to my knees with the torch ball in one and and reaching for my bow with the other I pick it up and quickly turn around throwing the lantern sphere softly into the air

and loading an arrow into my bow but there's nothing.


“how weak of you” said a deep but distorted voice behind me as I spin and prepare to

shoot it grabs my bow and crushes it i fall backwards landing hard on the ground “using

such a weak weapon for something much stronger then you” the distorted sound of this

creature scratched my ear making me wince and in a blink all of a sudden this thing is

right in front of my face so close I can smell its breath.


It smells like a rotting corpse now that I can see it probably its face is a skull and there

black goop dropping off its body but it still has a slightly human body its body is strong

like it spent its whole life training and there's tattoos going all the way up its hands they

almost look like curses as I slowly peace thogather who this person is I look at its face

in shock and whimper out “kakos”.


 “thats right im the god of death” kakos forced out of his decaying throat “you know I

haven't had a sacrifice in so long everybody forgot about me” and as he raised his arm

slowly and then it was gone maybe it got cut off by something then a warm feeling

started in my chest then that warmness was turn into a indescribable pain as I looked

down,there his hand right through my chest. 


then as quick as I saw it it was then quickly ripped out of my chest and in his hand was

my heart still beating “you really are as pure as I thought” and as my vision slowly and

turned black I watched him slowly bring my heart towards his mouth his razor teeth slowly

opening,and as I slowly closed my eyes the last thing I saw was the moon watching in

horror and the thing that shocked me to the core.



Thank you for reading my blog I hope you have a nice day and I would love some feedback on my work bye.

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