So for writing we have been doing describing . The image that we have been describing is a lightning storm we had to do show which means describe so they all had to start with the .
This is the photo we had to describe .
Here is the writing that I did .
1.The sea was black as midnight.
2. The air smelt cold and salty.
3.The sound was like bomber jet attack’s.
4.The fear inside me started to rise.
5.The air tasted damp from the surrounding water.
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