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Friday, 18 August 2017

the nightmare man

nightmare man



One dark and gloomy night I got to stay up late. That night me, dad and mum had just moved to a house in the dark forest. It was very cheap old two story house the light blue pant was terd down from the walls and if my family didn't buy it we would still be living out on the streets. That night when I went by the basement
to the stars I hord something go crack rumble ramble bang now my parent said strat in my face that i was not allowed to go in the basement. I went upstairs to ask dad to have a look but he was fast asleep and aswell I am an amazing inventor.




so I had to do It on my own It went rushing to my bedroom and put in my password my door unlocked kose it had a code and no key hole. I did that just so you now so I went in and got some of my pretend swords and went back to the basement and opened the door. And turned on my sword it was a glowing one it made light I slowly went down and sor blood on the floor I shivered with fear. Their was a man standing next to a dead Persona



The  man was doing something I looked at my pet parrot she was sitting on my shoulder “her name was Polly” I hardly said “ho..how are you. The man turned around I looked at his eyes one was red and the other was a robot he slowly walked closer to me holding a knife. The closer he got the further away I went from him then I went running up stairs I went Into my room my face looked pale and I looked like. I had just seen a ghost I had not explored my bedroom




I have only made It very safe I went around my room I went by a wardrobe I heard noises inside. They sounded like a girl's voice and also their wasn't just one voice I could hear heaps of them I opened It there was a hole lot of girls. Tied up and one boy they had things covering their mouth I took It of one that fell out of the wardrobe and asked. “How long have you been In their and how did you even get in their write after i said that I heard someone banging on my obsidian door (BANG BANG).



the girl qwickly replied “the man with the robot eye had pot us In there are parents are still looking for us out on the streets properly and we have been In their for. 99 month’s I was shocked I didn't now that the man was mad I went and untied all of the other girls they started to walk around I said does any of you now why that man has a robot eye. one of the girls said I do “ when he was five years old he had to get his eye taken out but only one. they asked what coler he wanted and he said red one week later his eye that wasn't taken out turned red to and it affected his brain. When he was sleeping when he woke up he could feel power and killed his parents and all his sibling's when he went to school. He killed every one there and started to kidnap others now he is 64 years old and normally he would get the kids easily. He doesn't want their parent he pot us in their and forgot about us and you outsmarted him “ I was actually really impressed



I quickly asked does he have a weakness. One of the girls said yes you will need to stab him our shoot him on his robot eye then you will have anafe time to call the police couse he will go blind for about 3 hours. and If you hit his eye twice he will go blind for 6 hours “thanks very much … what Is your name anyway “ they all said “ I'm



Alle Lose Rose Sky. Love Nature Ash Crystal and Buster he was the only boy i looked at them all their was 7 girls and one boy. well to me their were 8 girls because of me then I went to my wardrobe that I built I pot In a password then It opened. there were some guns and elso



some swords I took my aside gun and some aside bullets and said see you all later Alle Lose Rose Sky Love Nature Ash and Buster. I went out the door I put In one of my aside bullets In then I slowly went forward holding out my aside gun I had elso bring my camouflage outfit. When I got out I saw that the man had come out from the basement and had achly heat up his knife I had grabbed a  bottle of water on the way here. I then splashed It on the knife and It went back to a boring cold knife he started walking around looking for how done that to him then he spotted my shoe. And then he said in the creepiest voice i ever heard “ I see you so lets play a little game of hide and seek



After that he threw the knife and broke my cape i then got out my gun and said “ before I kill you I wont to now why did you kidnap people and forget where they were “I looked at his face and he looked really Embarrassed enough he yelled out I must finish you now before he cold finish he sor me throw a green ball I landed on his feet then it blow up and made his legs stuck to the ground then I started to shot my gun at him and he started to try and cut the green slime but then it dissolved the knife and when he looked up he got aside to one eye but it wasn't his robot eye then I shot the other one and ran to the phone and called the police when the police got here they went



to my parents and said you people let your daughter you’s your inventions then my parents said we didn't make them our daughter did the kop then quickly replied YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME the cop came running down to me and Actually gave me a metell he said kid you are the most smartest kid to excised


THE END

2 comments:

  1. Awesome work Bella keep it up

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  2. Hi Bella, it Michaela, here. I like your wonder full work. It good to read it. but when I was reading your writing. I was out of breathe. so next time can you put full stop in your writing. But Bella it wonder work keep it up.

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