I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 28 July 2017
Persistent pigeons
Persistent pigeons
One hot and sunny day me and my 2 brothers were sitting in the nest. OMG I nearly forgot to tell you my name. I am the oldest and my name is Chicken Nugget and my brothers names are Sunny and Lava. We were all very very very VERY bored then Lava squeaked and then we all did for a couple of hours. Then Lava looked to the left and saw a cupcake. We all hopped out of the nest then I as the oldest did as well. Then Sunny hopped out, well really he fell out.
We went to the cupcake I tried to jump up, then I came up with a good idea. We all hopped on top of each other and tried to get the cupcake but then we all fell down. Then we tried to think of a new idea. Then Lava set up this thing when me and sunny were talking and thought we should give up.Then when we saw what he was doing. When he had finished he asked Sunny to jump on the other side and then Sunny did. It didn't work then i did as well then he went flying
and fall off the ledge and missed the cupcake then we tried over and over and over and over to get it. Then we thought of something else and then we tried to climb the wall it was a total Fail then we made a canone it didn't even work. Then we just went back to the nest and then one hour later we saw mum. We started to squeak and she dropped down a worm then i told mum ‘i'm tired of having worm’s can’t you see the muffin over there
‘ mum then sadly said. but worms are good for you and … MUFFIN i will get it for you guys after you eat your worm ok’. me and my 2 brothers / lava and sunny said ok then mama. We gobbled the worm up and then mum went and got us the muffin and we all eat it even mum.
The end
By Isabella
Friday, 7 July 2017
ormie
Ormie
One day there was a little pig his parents would say he was so chupy. But he now they didn't mean it one day he was walking through the kitchen at his nana and grandads. He started to smell something it led to the fridge then he opened his eyes and sor a whole jar of cookies then he went running of he came back with a broom. And tried to posh it of
but then it just made it harder for him to reach then he went of sweeping then he got a chear well achily he really just throw it over here. then he started running like his life depended on it and spated into the fridge and went and got something else. Then he came back with 4 books and a ironing table then he got a bowling ball and slowly bring it onto the ironing table and he sat down on it and frow. the bowling bowl and it didn't work out as he planned then he went and got 6 boxes they were all different sizes so then he frow them all in the air and they ended up looking like stairs so then he climbed up them he started jumping up and down then is fot fell throw the first box then the second and then all of them. then he went and got a small trampoline then started jumping on it to get it then is broek and he started to cry. then he went of and got some plangers. then went and started to climb the side of the fridge then they got stuck so then he went flying away then when he came back he had a plunger on his head and his bottom end. then he tried to poll them off but instead it ended up on his mouth and leg then he tried again then it looked like he had bunny ears then it landed up as something i don't want to say. then he went of and got a chainsaw and cut through the floor he reached out to grab the cookies but he missed and fell thru the floor. And the cookies fell right back into place then he tied a rope to himself then went and got his bike and went up a ramp and went flying away. Then he got a giant slingshot and shot himself but missed the cookies again then tied a swing in the ear really high up and swang on it and kept missing then he got a stick and tried to get up their. But he went flying then he tried to get it down with a fishing rod but he cort a real fish. Then he got a firework and tried to fly up their but the rocket went up without him then he tried to go skydiving then he pulled out an umbrella. And it started to brake then he hit the ground and bounced up and nearly got it then slipped down. then he made a HUGE fuss then he made the fridge woppel and then the cookies fell out it looked like it was raining cookies. then the bowl fell onto his head and he couldn't eat the cookie then he got sad .
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