Nice to see that you enjoy reading my blog post because your here know today were doing a hotspot writing this one is for week 6 and you may have noticed its week 9 we've been a bit behind anyway we were given a image and had to write about it and use the things we have learned basically we had to use Onomatopoeia,hyperbole and personification anyway on with my story.
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It was a normal day here on the moon we had been staying here for at least a month now their had been strange lights coming from here on the moon so some of us astronauts came to investigate it does get very boring here but we can call other people ‘hey cabtin we have a problem’.
My friend came in with a face that doesn't look good ‘boom boom boom’ the sound of a gun filled my ears but not like a gun I have ever heard ‘thats what im worried about, their is unknown creatures around the area’ I swam in the air trying to get to a wall to push myself to the window.
I reached the wall and went rocketing off once I got to the window, the first thing that I saw was things running towards us they had misshapen bodies the one in front had a cape and a helmet covering its face if it had a face they had boots with some kind of heavy metal keeping them on the ground I had know idea why they were here ‘sir i think that they are here for the artifact we found’.
We had found a stone tablet it must have belonged to them ‘we should surrender’ I looked at him with a face saying no way ‘we're not surrendering are we’ ‘nope’ I rocketed towards the space controls and started it up ‘crack boom’ ‘we have to wait sir that's how it works I saw the red numbers counting down 10 9 8 7 6 5 ‘their nearly here sir’ yelled my friend 4 3 2 1 0 i got the controls and lifted the ship into the air.
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