its writing time

Hello welcome back to another blog post. Are you having a good day I hope you are.

Welcome back to another blog post I am planning on doing another blog post in my own time but for know i'm doing school work. Its writing time we have started to learn about something that is called Onomatopoeia this is a way of describing something using sound touch and the other senses

We first got some bullet points and put on some ideas we then had to turn them into a sentience or a tiny story (the parts that are high lighted in yellow means they are the ones that I used) here is the one that I made.

I waited there at the starting line. ‘CRACK’ It echoed around the arena. In an instant I darted from the starting line like a lightning bolt ’patter patter patter’ The people’s feet behind The other racer’s puffing and their breath behind me filled my ears combined with the sound of My heart beating.

• I am running an 800 meter track race

• The guides in the high-vis jackets telling me where to stand

• The loud crack of the starting pistol.

• I darted from the starting line like a lightning bolt.
• The audience cheering 
• The people’s feet behind me - pattering, lightly thudding
• The other racer’s puffing and their breath behind me
• My heart beating
• The commentator

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