Haunted story.

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Today in class we had to finish our story we had been writing. There was a list of this that we had to put in and I was the one who choose one of the thing we had to have the place in a haunted train track,have them ride there on a train,have sushi in it,have it the character with friends,and a cheetah I suggested the haunted train track. Here is my work.

The haunted train

It was a foggy 3 am morning me and my friends where supposed to go here at 6 am but

we couldn't sleep because we had a feeling like something was calling us there. We got

off the train ready to walk a kilometer to get to a place where a haunted train track was

located. After walking for what felt like an hour we arrived we looked at our phones to

see the time it was still 3 am. It felt like time had stopped as this place which would

normally be crowded and noisy was still and silent nothing but the sound of the

animals owls and a low growl almost like a cheetah but that was impossible we

lived in a place where there wasn't any cheetahs.

‘are you coming josh’ my friend said ‘y-yeah sorry’ I said as I looked up from my

notebook as we walked forward there in the fog we saw the rusty old train we

didn't want to go near it. This train track was different they normally had the

place where you bought tickets this one had a miny zoo and a mini market.

As we walked inside we were hit with a wave of rotting flesh and food we

looked at each other worringley but continued going.

we knew a little about the zoo apparently there used to be a cheetah wich was

the main attraction but the zoo was abusive to the animals they were

skinny and would have cuts and scabs all over them with teeth missing

that were ripped out and sold.

As we walked in my friend who we just call bizz gagged at something as

we looked over at what had caused her to gag we saw a sushi shop

there on the sushi which was still there we saw maggots and flies

covering the sushi ‘I guess I won't be eating the sushi we brought’

said Tom. As we continue walking we started to notice something

it was more silent than usual normally our friend Ava would be

talking and scaring us but we haven't heard from her this whole time

as we turned around we didn't see anything BANG a shoe

dropped from the ceiling as we pointed our flashlights up we saw

Ava hanging there with her arms tied to the roof and her head missing.

bizzy started to scream as Tom started to try and calm her down

then we heard a noise coming from one of the abandoned shops.

Out of the shop limped a cheetah with an eye missing, one of

the canine teeth were missing, an a ear had been ripped off, its

tail barely hanging onto the back ,its ribs about to burst out

of its skin the horrid smell of rotting hit again as my friends

started to run away from the cheetah.

I couldn't move I was frozen in shock my friend Tom came and

grabbed my shoulder pulling me away. As I started to run again

the cheetah chased us into the zoo where bizz fell and as we

kept running we could hear her screams and the sound of flesh

being ripped off. As we reached the cheetah cage Tom screamed

out in pain as he fell to the ground holding his arm as we looked

into the zoo we saw a zoo keeper rotting with maggots crawling

around in his skin, his arm being held on barely by two chunks of

rotting skin.

I try and pull him up and he eventually starts moving but he gets

shot again as the cheetah comes running towards us I drop Tom

and start running as his screams start to quiet. Then go dead

silent BANG a bullet goes flying past me I look behind me and

there is the zoo keeper again his leg covered in bite marks like

he had been used as a dog toy. I keep running and eventually

finding a back door.

I ran towards the way we got in I jump off the train platform as I

jumped I was blinded by the light of a train right next to me as the

train hit me it sent me flying. I was able to crawl of the train tracks before the train got me I crawled over to a tree and laid there holding

my ribs which felt like they had just been ripped out a burning feeling

started in my stomach as I put my hand on my stomach when I brought

it up to my face I saw it was covered in blood. I struggled to stay awake

as I grabbed my notebook I wrote this as you are reading this I beg you do

not go inside you will not leave here I hope you don't make the same mistake as

me and my friends.

As the cops investigated one stayed and investigated the dead body he found lying

under a tree he found a note book the body had placed its hand on before drifting off

to sleep on the cover it wrote josh's notebook. As he opened it he was hit with the

horrors of what went down here and realized that there was people who had gone inside

and some of his own crew and that they may go through the horrors of this place as well...

Thank you for reading my blog I hope you have a nice day bye.