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Friday, 17 August 2018

my Exposition writing

W.A.L.T we have been learning Exposition writing


 Here is the one that we did 



I find that normal classrooms can be annoying but they are still better then collaborative classrooms no offence any teachers reading this i have three reasons i don't like collaborative classrooms lets go right ahead

If there are two teachers they can have trouble deciding and that is just not cool i was once in a collaborative classroom and it is terrible one wanted to do art will the other wanted to do slime we ended up doing slime it is a complete disaster

Another problem would be in a collaborative classroom is that they could give you extra homework i find homework is already hard enough but with doble homework to me it is like double the trouble

And my third and final one is that they could forget something like your name or maybe they said they would bring treats but they didn't because they forgot they might forget to check your homework

Something interesting is that if their a two teachers and one is not here will they carey on ore will they get a replacement ?

It can get very annoying when two teachers can not decide what to do and all of that extra homework is just frustrating and i hated it when they ust to forget my name i think collaborative classrooms should not exist

1 comment:

  1. Hi Bella
    I found it really interesting to read your example of exposition writing. It is so different to normal story writing. I really appreciate how you were able to give your own opinion to let us know how your felt. Because you have been in both types of classroom environments you have been able to use that knowledge in your writing.
    You have set out your work into great paragraphs that make reading it easy to follow. You may want to make some your sentences a bit shorter though. Short sentences are a great way to convey feelings. It would work really well in the second paragraph "It was terrible".
    How did you feel writing about the classrooms, knowing your teacher would read it?
    Keep up the great blogs, look forward to reading more.

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