The girl in the red coat
It was an ordinary day in the village it was crowded. and the reason it was crowded was because it was a sunny day. But where we are it was barely sunny me and my mummy were going to buy some bread. and my name is Rose I was wearing my rose red coat. That was my favourite color
When my mummy and I were walking to get some bread I saw this amazing toy. it was the beast toy I had ever seen but when
I turned around I saw that mummy had left me.
I looked for her for hours it was helpless then I got a electricity wave go up my spine. Then I slowly started walking and the baddest thing was that I had forgotten where I live cause I had just moved here then I saw a cave by the little mountain so I went in. The cave and actually it was a nice little cave so. I went and collected some sticks. I had made a fire and I was getting hungry then I put my dirty hands in my pocket and found five dollars it was all I had. I went and I bought some food
then I saw my mom's feet go walking by. I heard her screaming out my name. ROSE then I screamed MUM YOU LEFT ME she saw me in the little cave she said let's go and buy that toy you wanted. And we happily walked all the way home.
The end
